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Noir Sketches Again

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Ever since I heard this song: [link] I've been sort of plotting for Noir for the first time in several months.

Most of the sketches here are Boyer, Coyote, and Charlie, the main characters of the story. I made some changes to the noir themselves, with even more realistic proportions in such a way they're borderline unsettling to look at.

Other story changes that are happening with the noir would be their speech method. They used to speak depending on how they died (someone dies telling a riddle, they speak in riddles the rest of the time). Since that's A-infuriating to write for and B-infuriating to write for to make it come across in a way that's not silly sounding. I changed their speech issues to more of glitching out when speaking, like here with Cheshire (glitched look came from Missing No. from Google). Chunks of speech will be missing and hard to decipher, leading to needing someone to try to translate it.

There are other changes too, but I'm still sorta working on those as well. I'll probably post an updated noir profile sometime.
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ClosetExtrovert's avatar
Man, as if the more realistic style wasn't creepy enough for Noir, you have them talking in Missingno. speak. Good work.